On the onion, I'd clean up the stringy bits on the bottom, it looks good overall, but I would get rid of the smudges on the right and left side. The glass base is warped, so it needs to be adjusted. The bowl of the glass looks good, but I'm wondering if there needs to be a rim light on the top of the bowl's edge. The stem needs to be sharpened and straightened. Good work on the subsurface light scattering.
Great job on the glass texture. It really looks like it continues around instead of just being one flat plane. The onion looks really good, but like Alicia said, could use a little cleanup along the edges.
Glass:Very nice on that glass. There's something about the base of that glass that seems a little off. Like maybe it's starting to turn up or need to be flatten a little bit. Other than that.. Great job!
Onion: Lovely onion! Like the overall rendering...and I can't suggest anything new to help improve the picture.
On the onion, I'd clean up the stringy bits on the bottom, it looks good overall, but I would get rid of the smudges on the right and left side. The glass base is warped, so it needs to be adjusted. The bowl of the glass looks good, but I'm wondering if there needs to be a rim light on the top of the bowl's edge. The stem needs to be sharpened and straightened. Good work on the subsurface light scattering.
ReplyDeleteGreat job on the glass texture. It really looks like it continues around instead of just being one flat plane. The onion looks really good, but like Alicia said, could use a little cleanup along the edges.
ReplyDeleteGlass:Very nice on that glass. There's something about the base of that glass that seems a little off. Like maybe it's starting to turn up or need to be flatten a little bit. Other than that.. Great job!
ReplyDeleteOnion: Lovely onion! Like the overall rendering...and I can't suggest anything new to help improve the picture.